Can you rate my Yu-Gi-Oh! deck and give me some suggestions on improving it?

First off, you have WAY TOO MANY CARDS. Try too kep it to the 40 card minimum. Also, if you want to play with people and go to tournaments, i suggest making a deck that goes with todays meta like Blackwings, Infernities, Gravekeepers etc. An easy way to get a good deck is to buy 3 of a structure deck like Machina Mayhem, combine the good cards together, add staple and BOOM! you have a good deck.